The introduction to an essay, admittance or any other paper may only be one paragraph, but it carries a lot of weight. An introduction is meant to draw the reader in, give them a preview of what the paper holds and convince them that reading it will be a rewarding experience – no pressure, right? The introduction may have plenty of responsibility but that doesn’t mean you need to sweat writing it. There are some easy steps you can take to ensure your introduction hooks the reader's interest and sets the stage for the rest of your paper.
Make it Part of Your Outline
The introduction often isn't included as you are brainstorming your way through the outline for your paper. Although the introduction isn't typically part of your outline, your outline should be a part of the introduction. This is especially true with longer papers or essays that tackle complex ideas or subjects. Running through the basic outline of your paper in the introduction offers readers a chance to preview what your paper is about and your stance on the issue or to evaluate how objective you'll be. For example, writing about the role the First Amendment has played in the history of the United States might lead you to touching on subjects like racism, bigotry or other hot button topics. Including them as a part of your introduction lets readers know you're not shying away from controversy but that you'll be framing it within your stated argument and that you can handle it without using inflammatory language.
The First Sentence
The first sentence is often the most difficult for any writer. Don't let that blinking cursor thwart your efforts, though. There's no rule that says you have to write that all important first sentence first. In fact, leaving that until later can be helpful since you may be knee deep in page 7 of your epic term paper when the perfect first sentence comes to you. If you're in the middle of dissecting the role of Anime in the evolution of Western cartoons when inspiration strikes, just type out that baby right where you are – you can always copy, paste and tweak it when you're done.
When crafting or editing your first sentence, avoid some of the common clichés that can make a first sentence less than impressive.
- Dictionary Definitions – Avoid starting things off with sentences like 'Webster's define 'attitude' as...' You may think it sounds scholarly, but dictionary definitions are too vague and kicking your paper off that way just sounds like you needed to beef up your word or page count.
- Restating the Question – Some essay writers rephrase the original essay question as a part of their introduction. Although establishing your approach is important, be sure it sounds completely different than the question or assignment text.
- Mapping Your Thoughts – You may find the mental path you took while researching and writing your paper to be pretty thrilling – but your readers won't. Leave out the evolution of your own approach and stick to the facts.
- Writing Yourself into a Corner – The introduction needs to be strong enough to stand on its own but also leave room for you to expand on thoughts throughout the paper. Be sure your statements leave room for more explanation later on.
Plant the Hook
There are several different ways you can hook your reader's interest when writing your introduction. Planting a hook at the beginning gives you a way to use a common narrative or return to your original ideas throughout the paper which can give the entire essay more flow as well as setting the stage for you to have a convenient way to bring it all together in the conclusion.
Using a hook in the introduction simply refers to writing a sentence that captures the imagination and attention of the reader. This is usually done with the first sentence as well as your final statement. Using a hook which also sets you up for a common thread throughout the essay is a great way to establish flow. For example, if you're writing about the proliferation of 'everyday celebrity' you can use Andy Warhol's famous quote about 15 minutes of fame for an initial hook and then introduce the rise (and fall) of any flash in the pan celebrity. Throughout the essay you can use the time line of that celebrity's career as a way to advance the story and findings of your paper. This not only makes the paper flow better, it also gives the reader a personal interest to follow.
The introduction for a college level paper has a lot of weight on its shoulders. The introduction needs to draw readers in, frame your paper and establish what you want to say. Although it seems the brunt of your work will be contained in the middle sections of your paper, the introduction is your first impression and your chance to get your foot in the door. Be sure you use all of your writing skills to craft the perfect introduction so that readers will give your paper the time and attention it deserves.
The writing weigh is designed to tackle students understanding of weight as well as helping them apply VCOP to improve their extended writing, essays and compare and contrast skills. This activity also gives students a chance to practise their addition skills.
The resource works on the basis the heavier the assignment the more sophisticated the answer is. Teachers should set a minimum weight for the assignment, which can easily be differentiated for groups of students. When setting the weight use kg instead of g so pupils have to remember 1000g = 1kg. Students then self or peer assess their work using the mat and totalling the weight of their assignment. This mats may also be useful during DIRT or POW time, when students need to respond to feedback.
I would advise laminating a class set of these to save on printing.
Tags: Numeracy , Numeracy across the curriculum, Numeracy4all, Feedback, Marking , DIRT